That time…

There's one moment in my mind 
of one lasting encounter... 

As I remember that time 
I sat on your counter...

November 30, 2020October 24, 2022 by Ash Ochoa Poetry Categories: My PoetryTags: NC, You 12 Comments

12 thoughts on “That time…”

Good post Hal!

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Anonymously Hal says:

Dec 01, 2020 at 11:56 pm

Thank you!

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I’ve been following your blog for a while Hal, but it’s the first time I’ve read your story. You’ve had a tough start to your young life and you are very brave to share it with us. Good luck with your nursing career and everything you do in the future!

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Anonymously Hal says:

Dec 01, 2020 at 11:58 pm

Aww 🥲 Thank you Hobbo. Tough starts just help create strong people right? 🙂 Thank you for taking the time to read it!

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- Hobbo says:
  
  Dec 02, 2020 at 4:23 am
  
  Yep. Tough starts make determined people. Keep up the good work!
  
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- Anonymously Hal says:
  
  Dec 04, 2020 at 5:07 am
  
  Thank you Hobbo!!! 🙂
  
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Ooh suspense! I always love the word choice and imagery, and the rhyme scheme. On point as always! 🖤

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Anonymously Hal says:

Dec 02, 2020 at 12:01 am

Thank you!!! 🙂♥️

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- wardah says:
  
  Dec 02, 2020 at 7:36 am
  
  You’re welcome! 😊💛
  
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