Craving

Your rough exterior was so
sharp and sour to me.

Intense and unforgiving.

But as I let you sit on my tongue…

Slowly you melted away into
something so suddenly sweet.

Leaving me with a hunger
and only wanting more.

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  1. Just don’t kill me yourself, Hal….isn’t it amazing how your words can rip open my chest & hit the heart?….this craving is one of the biggest things that’s been eating me away slowly….where my hunger is beyond descriptions….the moment I read your lines….I could sense what you’re going through….as in what I’ve been feeling….the mirror could be a wonderful thing ❤️🖤

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